1. Instead of starting a sentence with “there are” or “there is”, start it with the subject.
In most cases, simply sweep the expletive away and begin with a subject, as in revision of “There are other steps a company can take before an economic downturn to protect against its impact” to “A company can take other steps before an economic downturn to protect against its impact.”
2. Turn adjectival phrases into adverbs
Adjectival phrases are common in business jargon: on a daily basis; in a timely manner.
Replace with daily and promptly. The meaning is the same.
3. Refrain from using adjectives
These often bring no new meaning to the sentence.
We are currently accepting applications
we are accepting applications.
These shirts come in seven different colors
These shirts come in seven colors
From “3 Easy Ways to Write More Concisely”
By Mark Nichol
Class and Race Profiling in the Vaccine Culture War
Article by a guest writer on mercola.com.
My comment: This is not just a cultural war. In a very real sense, vaccination issue is a war for survival.
Elite members of the highest paid professions use academic journals and mainstream media to openly preach fear, hate, prejudice and discrimination against people who disagree with them about vaccination
Recent editorials have called for violence against and even death sentences for parents who opt not to follow the recommended vaccination schedule. Racial profiling is also blatantly employed
Class and race baiting has no place in the public conversation about vaccination and there should be no safe harbor for those who engage in it. Until laws limit the authority of doctors to violate human rights, your health and freedom are at risk
Sometimes it’s only in a dream that we glimpse a plausible solution. Perhaps because reason is fearful; it can’t fill in the gaps and achieve completeness, which is a form of simplicity; it prefers complexity, with all its gaps, and so the will entrusts the solution to dreams.
Antonio Tabucchi: A Riddle